My pivot try

My try and thanks for the tutorial of back flip

dodge


Lazer


if theres something wrong please tell me

heres another
Skate

the backflip was pretty good but the bullet he was dodging moved upwards oddly and was too slow, i thought the beam was stiff uneased and jerky,

Mind posting some gifs? some people might not want to download pivs. The lazor animation: The lazer itself was ok, although premade from droidz, make your own stks in future, it makes your animations more unique, and people will like them better if you're not using a downloaded effect. It looks like you know basic easing, which is good, like when the arm was raising, but the little arm crossover thing at the beginning was a bit awkward, you could have added a few more frames so it would be clearer. As I said, the easing in the arm's ok, but the rest of the body has to move a couple of pixels to make it un-stiff. The Backflip: The airtime imo is quite good, but the start is a bit off, you should have started with the figure going into a crouch, to show more momentum, starting him in a crouch is quite lazy. And in the 1st 2 frames the only thing that moved was the back, which was too many pixels to start off a movement. The thing flying across was a nice touch, but should have been spaced more instead of going that slow. You went like this with the yellow thing |---|--|----|----|---|--|--|--|---| Which is quite bad spacing, for something that's supposedly flying across the screen it should be something like |-----|------|-----|
Just simple quick spacing. The feet are all shakey, keep them in the same place when crouching, which you can do by using a marker, which if you don't understand just ask me about it, lol.
Sorry for semi lazy comment.

Glitch wrote:Mind posting some gifs? some people might not want to download pivs. The lazor animation: The lazer itself was ok, although premade from droidz, make your own stks in future, it makes your animations more unique, and people will like them better if you're not using a downloaded effect. It looks like you know basic easing, which is good, like when the arm was raising, but the little arm crossover thing at the beginning was a bit awkward, you could have added a few more frames so it would be clearer. As I said, the easing in the arm's ok, but the rest of the body has to move a couple of pixels to make it un-stiff. The Backflip: The airtime imo is quite good, but the start is a bit off, you should have started with the figure going into a crouch, to show more momentum, starting him in a crouch is quite lazy. And in the 1st 2 frames the only thing that moved was the back, which was too many pixels to start off a movement. The thing flying across was a nice touch, but should have been spaced more instead of going that slow. You went like this with the yellow thing |---|--|----|----|---|--|--|--|---| Which is quite bad spacing, for something that's supposedly flying across the screen it should be something like |-----|------|-----|
Just simple quick spacing. The feet are all shakey, keep them in the same place when crouching, which you can do by using a marker, which if you don't understand just ask me about it, lol.
Sorry for semi lazy comment.

hmm so i need to make my own? on paint right?
and thanks for the raminder

If you mean your own lazer, make it in pivot.

He wouldnt just slide backward when he was blasted back would he???? he would get a little airborne. But thats just my opinion

The backflip was pretty good, but yes, it was a little slow.

The lazer and the skate were both a little stiff, especially the lazer, because it didn't move at all when the beam was shot.

The skate was ok, but the arms were kinda choppy, and it wasn't all that fluid.



*Courtesy Returned

HAY U. Courtesy me, I made a thread

Lol, I have seen the tutorial to that first animation all to many times. I actually have the link to it

Ahh yes *Link*

Youtube tutorials suck...try DD

hmmm ok guys thanks for the info i will try again